Review of one of the rewritten scripts

Which scene did you work on?  What did you think of the style of the writing?
Matteo and I looked at one out of two rewrites and realised unlike the other one this was a bit more intense and showed the relationship between Creon and Antigone. But with the other one it is more of a childish thing were it has comedy and Creon and Antigone seem less passionate about their separate beliefs and it was easy to pass off with an apology.  However, this version of the scene could be performed with seriousness and aggression to express a point.

How was this scene different to the other script used in the lesson?
It was different because this version had more of a modern language to it than the original script. It consisted of offensive vocabulary which can be a powerful way to talk down to someone and argue a point.